iaekreverof 发表于 2021-11-18 01:59   全显示 1楼
哎，等了快半年了都。以前也看过一些优秀的文，断在类似的地方~估计这里到了瓶颈吧，故事怎么展开合情合理而不突兀，情节怎么安排才能引人入胜而不落入俗套，人物心理、行为发生什么样的转变以保证人物性格的统一性而不ooc，想想就很难~感觉绿文要写好了比普通的H文要难啊~希望作者在精益求精地准备，而不是太监了
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