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[魔法奇幻] 【魔王禁录】18-21(黑白双胞胎的臀塔破处)

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感觉作者是不是忘记了自己的设定,男主的精液已经变化成甜的,但是作者在描述间还是用的腥臭,这个是为了增加文章的刺激性吗?还是忘记了设定呢?而且后面男主接吻时也说了精液对他没什么味道,而不是甜的。还有就是男主对待两姐妹的态度感觉跟蕾娜差距好大,并不想是对待自己女人时的温柔,而是单纯的追求自己的爽快呀,感觉人设有点崩坏。在描述间作者总是想体现两姐妹真正的接受男主,但是在性爱上姐姐又总是觉得凄楚,无奈,并不像之前描述的接受男主,更想是被强迫的,总之就是字里行间给人一种矛盾的感觉。
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