1493499015 发表于 2023-5-1 18:41   全显示 1楼
作者加油啊，确实没必要每一章都是肉戏，手枪文战里很多的，想找很容易，但剧情铺垫好的，角色描绘刻画好的真的不多，作者就按照自己的节奏慢慢写，肉戏水到渠成的出来，看着就会很舒服的，而且你准备写的是长篇，那么就更不用急着写了，反而把人物刻画好，有助于后面剧情的发展啊


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